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Commission work. 


Taking a break from the emotional uploads for about 5 minutes. 
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:squee: that cat is too adorable, I just want to squish it.

I see you've already inked this, so you can't make any changes. But I just want to point out the arm holding the gun, for future reference. The forearm is pointing towards the viewer so naturally, due to perspective it's going to seem shorter, and that's fine. But then you have the gun which is almost entirely visible to the viewer from the side. So if you try and picture the pose in real life, the forearm and the gun would form sort of an L shape. The forearm would be pointing outward, while the gun would be pointing inward. Does that makes sense?
I'm assuming the gun is there to cover the chest area, but I think you could achieve a similar effect if you straighten that forearm and showed it more from the side, like the gun is now, and then just slanted the gun upwards so it's a bit more diagonal.

Other than that, I think everything is pretty much spot on. I love the hair, as always. :clap: